The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005
.The maps illustrate a development which took place in Brinslow between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, the major changes were the construction of an airport, factory, supermarket, ferry, and a new stretch of railway line in two maps.
First,
let's look at the east side of the river. The flora to the northwest of the school was chopped down to make way for the airport. The greenery and residential building to the southwest of the park were demolished and replaced with a factory. The greenery to the northeast of the hospital was cut down, and buildings
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built in their place. A ferry was set up next to the railway station. Now, let's look at the west side of the river. An interesting development had been the introduction of the multi-story building which was to the north and east of the lake. A supermarket was developed on the south of the lake. The plants and mansion on the south of the lake were converted into two multi-story mansions. The vegetation which was between two roads was chopped-down to make way for mansions .
Finally
, A new stretch of railway was constructed that runs from the east to the west
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