(tanha ) The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the percentage of divorces in

Finland

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and

Sweden

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over a 5 - year

period

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between 2011 and 2015.

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Sweden

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experienced a downward trend

while

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Finland

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showed an upward trend

troughout

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throughout

the

period

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.Both

countries

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country's

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divorce rates

has

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some fluctuations.

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Furthermore

Finland

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initially

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had a lower rate than

Sweden

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at the end

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of the

period

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Sweden

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Sweden's

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divorce rate

was45

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was 45

% in 2011then it rose slightly to 48%in 2012.

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figure

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figure

showed

gradual

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decrease to 47% in 2013 and

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dropped

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dropped

stradily

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steadily

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around 45% in 2014 and 37% in 2015 Tanha (IELTS): The percentage of divorce rate in

Finland

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was 36% in 2011 and it decreased in 2012.

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,it rose to 39% in 2013 and 40% in 2014 and remained

stwady

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steady

in 2015

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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123 words

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