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Today, many people do not know their neighbors. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

#people #neighbors
In
this
 modern era, there is an ever-increasing number of
people
 who
being
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 close to each other very much by helping one another.
However
, some
people
 believe that they do not have time to communicate with others.
This
 increase
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 from a variety of reasons and some solution will be suggested to address
this
 problem. There is no doubt that living in
the
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large cities will bring manifold community issues. A number of
factor
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 may account for
people
 will tend to live alone and
they
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do not have
opportunity
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 to meet one another in urban
areas
. Because they
want
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 spend time on their work and get
the
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promotions, so they do not care about
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others. The most familiar example is that in Da Nang city, with
busy
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 life,
people
in
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here always ignore and do not want to interact with their surrounding
neighbors
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.
However
, there are still some
people
 who make friends and communicate with others around them.
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, it
seem
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 quite that
people
 not knowing
the
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neighbors
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 is still a serious problem. It can
also
 be argued that there are many solutions that can fix the issues .
this
 will bring about profound influences on citizens, they can construct a
sport
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 club in the residential
areas
 to
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exercise with each other and establish a range of new relationships with their
neighbors
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. A clear example is that, in Viet Nam, residential
areas
 have improved and built collective clubs to enhance friendships. Especially, thanks to clubs citizens get to know everyone better,
this
 will help the to be more active in society.
Whereas
,
this
 is almost not available in all
areas
.
Thus
, it
make
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 no difference that they can connect with
neighbors
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in
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 social media to contact easily. In conclusion, there
are
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 a variety of
reason
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 for contributing
to
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nowadays
people
 want to live their private lives. Citizens and local authorities should take proactive measures to tackle
this
 problem.
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