In many countries fast food becomes part of life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

In the modern world,
people
are focusing towards the
quantity
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of
meals
rather than the quality of
meals
. At
work
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they require permanent measures but in their own
life
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they are adapting quick-fix solutions. I believe that the adaptation of fast
food
in daily life with a combination of a sedentary lifestyle will produce catastrophic effects on our health. The temptation of ingredients and piping hot sauces with fast delivery of
food
with easy availability are the core reasons which attract
people
towards fast
food
.
In addition
, some folks consider quick
meals
over traditional healthy
food
due to
the nature of work.
For example
, Delivery drivers usually prefer to take quick-fix
meals
while
travelling rather than spending time in different locations to consume healthy
meals
. When the consumption of high-calorie meal is mixed up with our habits which includes sedentary lifestyles it will develop severe medical problems
such
as obesity, cardiovascular diseases, Gastric diseases and many more.
For instance
, a hike has been reported in cases of heart attacks in young
people
which may probably be
due to
the consumption of unhealthy
meals
.
Similarly
, Gastric related problems are
also
widely discussed and associated with quick
food
.
Moreover
, youngsters are
also
losing their interest in sports as they always feel lethargic and feel fullness in their abdomen.
Thus
, it will lead to a detrimental lifestyle.
On the contrary
, if
people
avoid junk
food
people
may obtain a much healthy lifestyle and
in
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result
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they can save a decent amount in terms of health checkups To put it in a nutshell, Process foods may always produce a negative effect on health as it doesn’t consist necessary minerals and
food
extracts that are found in natural
food
.
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