In many countries fast food becomes part of life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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In the modern world,
people
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are focusing towards the
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of
meals
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rather than the quality of
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. At
work
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they require permanent measures but in their own
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they are adapting quick-fix solutions. I believe that the adaptation of fast
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in daily life with a combination of a sedentary lifestyle will produce catastrophic effects on our health. The temptation of ingredients and piping hot sauces with fast delivery of
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with easy availability are the core reasons which attract
people
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towards fast
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, some folks consider quick
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over traditional healthy
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due to
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the nature of work.
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, Delivery drivers usually prefer to take quick-fix
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while
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travelling rather than spending time in different locations to consume healthy
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. When the consumption of high-calorie meal is mixed up with our habits which includes sedentary lifestyles it will develop severe medical problems
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as obesity, cardiovascular diseases, Gastric diseases and many more.
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, a hike has been reported in cases of heart attacks in young
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which may probably be
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the consumption of unhealthy
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, Gastric related problems are
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widely discussed and associated with quick
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, youngsters are
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losing their interest in sports as they always feel lethargic and feel fullness in their abdomen.
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, it will lead to a detrimental lifestyle.
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, if
people
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avoid junk
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people
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may obtain a much healthy lifestyle and
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they can save a decent amount in terms of health checkups To put it in a nutshell, Process foods may always produce a negative effect on health as it doesn’t consist necessary minerals and
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extracts that are found in natural
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