The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
The line graph compares the percentage of four recyclable materials in a specific country between 1982 to 2010.
It is clear that
paper
and cardboard
were the most popular to recycle throughout the period,
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apply
while
recycling plastics
was the least popular. It is also
noticeable that there were
an upward trend Change the verb form
was
on
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in
recycling
rate for selected materials.
In 1982, the residents recycled approximately 65% of their Correct article usage
the recycling
paper
and cardboard
, compared to 50% who recycled their glass
containers and no figures were given both
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for both
aluminum
cans and Change the spelling
aluminium
plastics
recycling. After 4 years, there was a 5% increased
in recycling Replace the word
increase
paper
and cardboard
, conversely
the trend for Add a comma
,conversely
glass
recycling decreased by 5%. This
is the year that they started to collect data for recycling aluminum
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aluminium
can
with only around 5%. In 1990, they recorded some residents recycling Fix the agreement mistake
cans
plastics
with only 5%. The figures for paper
and glass
dropped in n this
year with
62% and 40%, respectively.
From 1990 to 2010, there Change preposition
by
were
a continuous upward trend in recycling Change the verb form
was
glass
containers, aluminum
cans and Change the spelling
aluminium
plastics
, while
a slight decreased
in recycling Replace the word
decrease
paper
. At the end
of the period given almost 70% recycled their paper
and cardboard
which is the most popular material. Secondly
, approximately 60% recycled glass
containers while
the figure for recycle
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recycled
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an aluminum
aluminum
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aluminium
can
had seen Correct subject-verb agreement
cans
the
significant Correct article usage
a
increased
around eight times more compared Wrong verb form
increase
when
it started. The least popular Change preposition
to when
recycable
material was plastic Correct your spelling
recyclable
that
recorded a minimal Correct pronoun usage
which
increased
Replace the word
increase
by
around 8%.Change preposition
of
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard, plastics, glass, aluminum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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