The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The line graph compares the percentage of four recyclable materials in a specific country between 1982 to 2010.

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paper

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and

cardboard

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were the most popular to recycle throughout the period

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while

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recycling

plastics

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was the least popular. It is

also

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noticeable that there

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an upward trend

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recycling

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rate for selected materials. In 1982, the residents recycled approximately 65% of their

paper

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and

cardboard

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, compared to 50% who recycled their

glass

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containers and no figures were given

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aluminum

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aluminium

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cans and

plastics

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recycling. After 4 years, there was a 5%

increased

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in recycling

paper

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and

cardboard

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,

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conversely

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the trend for

glass

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recycling decreased by 5%.

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is the year that they started to collect data for recycling

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aluminum

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can

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with only around 5%. In 1990, they recorded some residents recycling

plastics

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with only 5%. The figures for

paper

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and

glass

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dropped in n

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year

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62% and 40%, respectively. From 1990 to 2010, there

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a continuous upward trend in recycling

glass

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containers,

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aluminum

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aluminium

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cans and

plastics

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,

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a slight

decreased

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in recycling

paper

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.

At the end

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of the period given almost 70% recycled their

paper

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and

cardboard

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which is the most popular material.

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, approximately 60% recycled

glass

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containers

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the figure for

recycle

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recycled

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an aluminum

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aluminum

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aluminium

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can

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cans

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had seen

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significant

increased

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around eight times more compared

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to when

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it started. The least popular

recycable

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recyclable

material was plastic

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recorded a minimal

increased

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by

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around 8%.