some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school year. do advantage of teaching languages to young children outweigh the disadvantages? Give your own opinion.

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elementary schools
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begin teaching
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overseas dialect. In my opinion, the advantages of
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disadvantages.
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Firstly
, the prominent
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of learning foreign
languages
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early age
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that teenagers might know about different types of
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. when young
children
have knowledge about another tradition, they may easily communicate with another country of people without
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of guiders with the assistance of
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they not only
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their relationship with strangers but
also
exchange their cultures.
Secondly
, juveniles might acquire new things if teachers give information regarding other
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languages
such
as they would know the latest things which could be beneficial for their country and
also
society.
Nevertheless
, other
languages
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minds.
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teenage
children
have more responsibilities related to the academic field
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they need to give time to outdoor activities so they have no enough time to learn other kinds of language
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before they have more subjects which are tough for them because they have little power to remember that thing.
As a result
, it puts a negative
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on
children
's health.
For example
, a survey conducted by 'Harward University' revealed that in 2010 a few schools were starting teaching non-native
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65% of
children
were suffering from mental problems.
To conclude
,
although
once schools commence educating another country of the tongue with
this
children
may face brainsickness and many more, from my point of view, its positive points are more considerable than the demerits.
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