The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of family weekly
expenditure
in a particular nation in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, the average family
expenditure
had significantly changed over the 50 years. Another interesting point is that spending on
food
was the highest expense in 1968,
whereas
in 2018, leisure had the majority of the family budget in weekly spending, followed closely by housing. In 1968, families spent 35% of their weekly income on
food
which was the highest
expenditure
compared to other budgetary concerns; each of any categories showed between 5% and 10%.
On the other hand
, fuel and power were the lowest at 6%. By 2018, the
expenditure
on
food
had dropped considerably from 35% to around 16%,
while
leisure had become more critical
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families’ income and spent on leisure rose more than 20%, followed by housing and
food
, at 19% and 17% respectively. When people’s usage of clothing and foot ware doubled to roughly 14% from 7%, the weekly spending on household goods remained unchanged in both periods.
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