Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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The number of

people

who are gaining

weight

is in an increase in many countries, mainly in the

high income

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countries.

Moreover

this

is one of the main issues that nations need to consider.

This

essay will discuss two main solutions to

this

problem.

The

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Obesity

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obesity

is a serious issue that can cause damage to

individuals

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individuals'

individual's

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health

especially

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,especially

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to old

people

. One of the solutions is to improve the advertisement by health ministries to give a clear picture of what

humen

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humans

can lose because of

obesity

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, in Europe they try to show a lot of

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

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