The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The two given maps illustrate the existing manufacturing area in Norbiton and plans for the predicted alteration of the town.
Overall
, as is shown in the illustrations, residential neighbourhoods in addition
to supporting facilities are to be redeveloped in the future.
According to
the plan, presently, there is a roundabout that connects southern, and eastern roads with several factories that are to be removed subsequently
.The area around the eastern line is to be for housing and school at the end
, and a playground to the north. Another roadway is planned to be added north from a roundabout and over a river, with housing along the western side of the route and other accommodations where a highway parallels the river and linked to the north of the river is to be shifted to the east.
To the northwest of the roundabout, more housing is likely to be built at the end
of the pathway and along one side. There are also
plans to construct shops to the southwest and a medical centre to the southeast and the second roundabout to the south where two roads meet together.Submitted by Ymir
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