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The chart illustrates the percentages of
students
in four different kinds of secondary
schools
in 2000, 2005, and 2009. As a general trend, the percentage of children going to community
schools
showed an increasing
number
of
students
attending over the given year
while
the three other educational institutions’
students
’ percentages kept decreasing. In terms of specialist
schools
, the
number
of their
students
had declined slightly, one
percent
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. Its figure shows the least dropping compared to the Grammer
schools
and the Voluntary-controlled
schools
whose percentage of
students
had a significant fall over the year at 52%, 38%, and 20% in 2000, 2005, and 2009 respectively. As for the Grammer
schools
, their
number
of
students
dropped by 5% in 2005 and
then
it declined by 7% from that in 2009.
On the other hand
, the
number
of people choosing to go to Community
schools
considerably increased over the year given. The
number
began at 12% in 2000 but it rose to 32% in 2005 and
at the end
, in 2009, it reached 58%.
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  • networking opportunities
  • personal growth
  • financial burden
  • tuition fees
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  • recognition of degrees
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