Some people think that parents have a powerful influence in child’s life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child’s development. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Though

,

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parents have

a

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good control over their

children

,they

are tend

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to learn from

our

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surroundings.Which is directly connected to their upbringing.I completely agree with

this

statement because kids spend most of

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time

outide

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outside

instead

of

home

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. First and foremost, infants

are

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love to mimic other

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and they learn many

things

from their

friends

.

In other words

, a child

spend

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most of the time with

friends

, which helps him or her to advocate his

friend

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behaviour.

For example

, if a

chlid

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child

go school and make

friends

that might

be alter

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his behaviour .Because

friends

has

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a greater effect on

children

.

Secondly

, there

is

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many

things

to know which can't be

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acquired

by seating at

home

.Without

comming

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coming

outside we can't learn communication, humanity, honesty etc.To be precise,when

children

are out of the

home

they meet with many

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and it

assist

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them to learn communication.

Moreover

,

children

are able to gather a

varity

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variety

of

knowlege

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knowledge

from

the

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society.

For instance

, whatever good or bad happened in

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soceity

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society

children

see these and have an idea about right and wrong.

That

is help

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him or her to

being

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a good

peson

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person

.

Apart from

this

, many

children

often go in

a

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wrong way with bad

influnce

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influence

influences

from outside. In conclusion, parents can teach

a lots

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of

knowlegable

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knowledgeable

things

by seating their

children

at

home

but

their

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is plenty of

things

which can't

be learn

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from

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home

.

That is

why I believe that

children

have a great effect on their upbringing from

outside

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.