Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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, achievement in life has a major role to play as it shapes personality. only individuals put constant effort into tasks, and the result turns out fruitful. Linking Words
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as the students after finishing university willing to start work. Linking Words
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born into affluent families can help to easily develop themselves. Correct your spelling
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men
whose father is rich can open a privet company without the need to take cash from a bank. Fix the agreement mistake
a man
secondly
, it's more than clear hard work and determination to be successful. By working hard and being determined Linking Words
forward
to move skills and knowledge for gain. these skills and information easily kay to dealing with problems, and Rephrase
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hand, a hard effort is most important to achieve goals.Correct article usage
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion