the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person. in the UK, Sweden, Italy, Portugal between 1967 and 2007. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person. in the UK, Sweden, Italy, Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the average carbon dioxide emission in each people in four European countries, namely the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in the years 1967 and 2007.
Overall
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, both countries the UK and Sweden were falling trend, Italy and Portugal experienced a steady gradual over the period of time. In detail, in 1967, the figure for the UK carbon dioxide emissions was picked at the highest point nearly 11, unlikely the other years, which dramatically declined to 9 in 2007. Even though Sweden showed an increase in CO2 emissions rate from 1967 to 1977, almost 8 grew to more than 10 in 1977.
However
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this
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percentage started to decline gradually to the lowest point in 2007.
On the other hand
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it is clear that
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Portugal had to roughly 2 in 1967.
Furthermore
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, it started to rise gradually over the year till it became nearly 5 in 2007, and
then
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it showed a dramatic increase in 1997. The trends remained gradually for the next years, with just over 8 CO2 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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