Some people thinks that watching news is good for individuals and some thinks not . discuss both views and also give poinion

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Watching the
news
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is considered an
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excellent opportunity, which is assisting
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to know around the world during
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the daytime
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,
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because it provides
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from different resources.
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, many authorities believe that
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argument is incorrect. In my
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social media,
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as Twitter and Facebook, is taking place of watching television or streaming services. First of
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Journalism is changing since
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of the internet. ,
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understanding of the
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also
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changed.
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generation supports the idea of
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social media
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which is providing individual ideas of many
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and their shared
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in most countries at
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any time of the day.
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Twitter, one of the most important and powerful web-service, give
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opportunity for sharing their own experiences,
news
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and thoughts.
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, a few television channels create their own Youtube accounts to start streaming on the internet.
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, many
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still use old-fashion magazines, tabloids, broadsheets and TVs for tracking
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.
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social media has
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of spreading fast, some
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citizens believe that newspapers and television are still the best
information
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resources because these are reliable and consistent materials. One clear example is a group of
people
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who may spread disinformation which is unacceptable for urgent conditions namely a natural disaster, a civil war or an election. In conclusion, there are several methods available for
people
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who want to know the
news
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. Some citizens support the opinion that old-school
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resources TVs and newspapers are still the best. In my point of ,view social media is a great opportunity for fresh and true
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compared to TV which is going to be obsolete.

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