The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams above show the changes in Grange
Park
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between 1920 and now.
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, only the rose nursery on the left of the Arnold Avenue entryway is kept the same and there is a new feature was added to the place. As we can see, right after you come into the
park
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from the Arnold Avenue entry,
instead
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of the old fountain that was built in 1920, we can see that it was replaced by a big rose
garden
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, that was properly combined
by
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with
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the old rose
garden
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on the right of the Arnold Avenue entrance and the rose
garden
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that was on the left of the Eldon street entrance. Surrounding that new rose
garden
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are
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is
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the seats that were moved from around the
park
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.
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,
instead
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of the rose
garden
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on the top right of the
park
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, a new cafe was built to meet the demand of the people that visit the
park
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. Next to the new cafe, the pond for water plants was turned into a
children
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children's
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playground for families to let their kids meet new friends. Opposite the new cafe and
children
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children's
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playground, a new water feature was added to replace the old glass house and a new underground car
park
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was
also
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built underneath that. On the other side of the diagrams, the old stage for musicians was upgraded into an amphitheatre for concerns with a bigger scale and more seats.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, garden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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