The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart indicates how the percentage of citizens who are older than 4 years old like
radio
and television shows in a whole day in 1992 in the UK.
Overall
, it can be seen that British
audiences
generally liked to
listen
Add the preposition
tolisten
show examples
radio
in the morning.
In contrast
, television shows were more popular, especially, in the evening.
Radio
companies operated at 6:00 am with about 7% of British
listening
Add the preposition
tolistening
show examples
them.
After
this
, the
number
of
audiences
increased significantly and reached a peak of about 25% after 8:00 am.
On the other hand
, there was no any people watch
TV
shows at 6:00 am. Even at the morning period, the
number
of
audiences
had been kept under 10%. After 8:00 am, the
audiences
started to turn off their
radio
, and the
number
of them decrease slightly for the rest of that day.
However
, the proportion of
TV
viewers rose and overtook
radio
listeners at 1:00 pm. At 4:00 pm, there is an immense increase of the
number
of
TV
audiences
, and
finally
it climbed up to the peak about 45% at 8:00 pm. But after that time of point, it dropped sharply. Both
TV
and
radio
audiences
reminded just 3% at midnight 2:00 am.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, audiences, number, tv with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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