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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The advancement in
media
development
 dramatically changed the living standard of
people
. to support their
life
 where
people
 cannot survive without the
media
. Even though there are many advantages of
this
, there
are
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 some
drawback
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drawbacks
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 which
are
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 worth considering. There are several advantages of
media
 in our daily
life
. The
development
 of social
media
in
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online makes
people
connected
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 easily. Now, we can make friends from
every one
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in
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around the world to exchange ideas and share our lesson learning and best practice from our experiences. The
Media
 online
create
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creates
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life
 so much easier, we can
fine
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find
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 stuff just with a click which helps to
saving
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 time and less
of
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cost.
Media
also
 help
people
 to know easily what's going on in the other place. The
phenomenons
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 are known by everyone because of the prevalent use of
onlin e
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online
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media
 on websites. On the other side, there are a few disadvantages
of
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 using
media
 in our lives. The
development
 of
media
such
 as
media
 that
using
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 computers resulted in
a
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less exercise
of
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in
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people
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 activities.
This
 lifestyle
which
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leads to health and social problems.
Additionally
, sometimes
media
 online are not safe for privacy and our personal data can be hacked and can be used for negative
purpose
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purposes
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.
Moreover
,
development
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 of
media
 online in society
create
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people
 to spend their time
for
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online rather than for their family or social
life
.
As a result
,
people
 are suffering from loneliness and stress. In conclusion,
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even though
 most
people
 tend to
using
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media
 as
their
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 part of
life
 to connect
each
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with each
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 other in
efficient
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an efficient
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 way, it
also
 can
leads
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 to various drawbacks
such
 as health
problem
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problems
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as well as
decay
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a decay
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personal
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of personal
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life
.
Therefore
, the negative consequences of the drawback should be paid attention
by
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 regulation to prevent the negative effect of using
media
.
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