You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date •explain your accommodation needs •ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir My name is Vỹ. Currently, My major is Computer Science and I'

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a second-year student. I'

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writing to ask you some questions regarding the short course to training college abroad. I would like to ask you for some details about

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program for ready to go overseas.

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program and to which lesson we will day one and day two. I'

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happy when you share detailed lessons from

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, please help me to identify which dates we will go abroad and the dates we will turn back. By the way, I wanna ask you about accommodation. I would like my dorm will have a balcony as I would like to enjoy the fresh air in Singapore

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forward to hearing from you as soon as possible Thanks and regards Vỹ

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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short course
training college
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departure date
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