You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date •explain your accommodation needs •ask for information about getting to and from the college

#course #college #accommodation #officer #•give #departure #date #•explain #•ask #information

Dear Sir My name is Vỹ. Currently, My major is Computer Science and I'

a second-year student. I'

writing to ask you some questions regarding the short course to training college abroad. I would like to ask you for some details about

this

program for ready to go overseas.

Firstly

, kindly help me to give me

overview

Correct article usage

an overview

show examples

this

Change preposition

of this

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program and to which lesson we will day one and day two. I'

happy when you share detailed lessons from

this

program.

Secondly

, please help me to identify which dates we will go abroad and the dates we will turn back. By the way, I wanna ask you about accommodation. I would like my dorm will have a balcony as I would like to enjoy the fresh air in Singapore

due to

the weather being comfortable. If you have any questions, please free feel to let me know. I'

forward to hearing from you as soon as possible Thanks and regards Vỹ

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