In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People
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will be able to read everything online for free
instead
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of purchasing printed newspapers or
books
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in the future. Personally, I partly agree that
people
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will be able to read News online without paying, but they should purchase
books
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whether it is online or not.
According to
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reading newspapers, it is true that individuals will be able to get free ones on the Internet.
For example
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, a number of platforms
such
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as UDN, New York Times, and The News Lanes provide
readers
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with free service to read News. The reason why it is free is that when
readers
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read articles on online platforms, advertising is
along with
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the articles.
Thus
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, platforms are able to profit from the fee of advertisement without asking
readers
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for payment.
Apart from
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this
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,
humans
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recently tend to be more eco-friendly than before, and
then
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humans
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seldom read printed newspapers made of wood.
On the other hand
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, I disagree that
humans
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could enjoy
books
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without any fees.
Books
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are usually made by editors who spend a lot of time, creativity, knowledge, and experience on the
books
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. Those money, and salary, often support writers to continue creating.
Therefore
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, if
humans
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did not pay for
books
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, writers would not write
books
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anymore.
Moreover
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,
readers
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will gradually purchase e-
books
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on the Internet rather than printed ones, because reading e-
books
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is relatively convenient and cheap. In conclusion, I agree that a huge number of
people
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will able to read free broadcasts on the Internet ;
however
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, I disagree that
people
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could read
books
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online without any payments in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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