The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates micrograms per cubic metre of pollution in the UK from 1600 to 2000.
Overall
, there were two peaks of sulphur dioxide activity over all
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overall
period
. However
, the most harmful period
for smoking was almost int the end of the recorded time.
Sulphur dioxide pollution grew dramatically between 1600 and 1725 when it reached a peak at approximately 750 units. After that was a short period
of decline until 1775, then
the level increased steadily and reached the second high point at almost 900 micrograms per cubic metre in 1850. During the last
150 years
the line shew a significant decrease to almost zero in 2000.
Smoking pollution had the same trend but with lower numbers. There was a relative growth from 1600 to 1870 when it reached a peak at over 450 units. Later we can see a Add a comma
,years
period
of dropping with high fluctuation between 1925 and 1960. In addition
, the harmful level fell to a zero mark in 2000.Submitted by svetlis2000 on
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