Task1; The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of using
water
for three different purposes in North America
, South America
, Europe
, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
. Overall
, most of the areas use
water
in agriculture, whereas
both Europe
and America
have the most water
consumption in the industrial field.
In detail, agricultural use
of water
registered the highest rate in South America
,Africa, Central Asia
and East Asia
the percentage that ranged between 71% to 88% of the total consumption. Furthermore
, the data in Europe
and America
showed a slight decline in that purpose in Europe
and America
where it is considered to be the second high usage in demand. However
, industrial water
use
was the top in Europe
and America
which registered 53% and 48% respectively. The percentage of the other areas did not exceed 12&. Moreover
, the proportion of domestic use
is considered insufficient, especially in Asia
with only 7% and Africa with 9%. The figure for this
consumption experienced the highest water
use
at homes in South America
with 19& and in Europe
at 15& as well as
13% in North America
.Submitted by e.alharbii on
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