In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is observed that vegetarians are increasing in numbers in some countries.
Although
following a vegetarian Linking Words
diet
would help protect Use synonyms
animals
, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because the body would not get all the required nutrients.
One benefit of following a vegetarian Use synonyms
diet
would be saving Use synonyms
animals
. Use synonyms
This
means one does not have to kill and torture Linking Words
animals
to eat meals. Use synonyms
Animals
are kept in uncomfortable and small places, and Use synonyms
then
killed and sold to markets and butchers for human consumption. Linking Words
For instance
, Argentina's population hugely depends on cow Linking Words
meat
for their daily nutrients. In Use synonyms
this
way, thousands of cows are butchered for human consumption. Linking Words
However
, I believe that avoiding Linking Words
meat
would not make a significant contribution to saving animal's life.
In order for a human body to function in an efficient manner, it is required to have a Use synonyms
diet
that includes food Use synonyms
that is
rich in nutrients, vitamins, and proteins which can be found in Linking Words
meat
. Iron is another component Use synonyms
that is
very difficult to find in fruits and vegetables. Linking Words
Also
, people would be more prone to diseases if Linking Words
meat
is not included in their Use synonyms
diet
. Use synonyms
For example
, people who are Linking Words
anemic
are vegetarians who need to have iron supplements because they lack iron in their Change the spelling
anaemic
diet
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I believe that having a healthy Linking Words
diet
is the most important than any other thing.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
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animals
are protected following a vegetarian Use synonyms
diet
, I believe having a balanced Use synonyms
diet
is more important. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I consider that the drawbacks of a vegetarian Linking Words
diet
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outweighs
the benefits.Change the verb form
outweigh
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...