You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

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Dear Optimal Synergy, I am writing from the Botanica

company

about the event that you recently managed for us. It was at the Continental Hotel in downtown Saigon and was held the weekend before

last

(the weekend of the 23rd) in the 4th-floor reception area. There were some issues during the meeting that you could have foreseen in my opinion.

Firstly

, the catering was late and there were few dishes that appealed to attendees. We are a local

company

but the majority of the food was western.

Additionally

during the meeting, we tried to reach your

company

in order to arrange for an extra hour but could not contact you.

This

was extremely unprofessional. From my point of view, you should address these problems immediately by ensuring that you have catered

according to

the tastes of the

company

you are representing. There should

also

be a backup number to deal with any issues that come up during the event. I hope that you will be able to make some form of restitution to us for these inconveniences. Please reply promptly. Best Regards, Linh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

183 words

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