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Some people think that intelligent student should teach separately whereas others think that everyone should teach together. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #student
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students
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 learning ability will vary
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 studies, many of them
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agree
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 the statement but few
pupil
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pupils
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 were opposed to it. Every individual
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 own talent, some can learn fast and other might slow. The below paragraphs provided
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some examples of
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a tendency
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tendency
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 towards approaching their target. Presently, the education system
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 bought tremendous changes
inorder
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 to bring every
candidates
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 with good score and maintain
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 reputation of the institute. In the school, all kinds of
students
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 will be Present some may
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quiet
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 intelligent and others
an
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 average level.
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,
earlier
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in earlier
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 days the teachers will guide
subject
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 as a formal method that means in one short
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topic will explain and
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upcoming
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the upcoming
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 period may take
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 chapter. Some of them who have
ability
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the ability
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 to grasp the points will learn faster, but
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 candidates
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 to understand
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things which
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 to
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the absence
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 of
mind
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.
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this
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 is one major
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facing
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 by
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a few
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students
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. As per current practice, most
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the school
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school
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schools
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segregating
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 the
students
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 into different
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sections
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.
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 schools like PES, PACE and
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 more
instituation
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institution
institutions
,
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previous
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marksheet
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mark sheet
 the management will shuffle
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each person into different section almost every year even though
subjects
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 remains
same
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. Masters will train up a
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 scores by providing extra classes,
additional
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test
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tests
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gor
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for
or
practicing
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practising
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 to attend exams and assignments for improving their learning
skill
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skills
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.
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, the separation would bring more benefits for
students
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 who have very less understanding capacity. In conclusion, people have
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a different
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opinion
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opinions
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 on teaching
a candidates
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candidates
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 by doing division but
as per
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 my opinion it is one the best method to make children
to
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understand the concepts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • tailor-made
  • enriching experience
  • diversity
  • collaborative learning
  • equality
  • inclusive education
  • differentiated instruction
  • personalized approach
  • homogeneous groups
  • intellectual stimulation
  • interpersonal skills
  • critical thinking
  • peer interaction
  • self-confidence
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