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Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best, these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#trend #alternative #forms #medicine #methods
In our daily lifetime, being ill for
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times
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obviously
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 in our life. By the way,
while
 many
people
 rely on the
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medicine
 by
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, many more
people
 have a tendency to
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 the
alternative
 treatment and trust them
although
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 can have numerous upshots for their health. In
this
 topic a completely agree with the statement.
To begin
 with, the
alternative
 forms of medication are based on the
achievemnt
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achievement
achievements
 of ancestors’ past. Religion, tradition and superstition have been already appearing in any aspects of our life. It’s not just affected in
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human society but
also
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 the medical
fields
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 too. By distorting some of the
primative
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primitive
 treatments which are already distorted,
plethora
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 of
methords
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methods
 had
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 without any
scientfical
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scientific
scientifical
 proof. Because of that, using these doubted
form
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 of
medicine
 isn’t seem to be a good idea. To elaborate
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, many
people
 using
alternative
methords
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methods
 can undergo the disease not because they are using these forms of
alternative
medicine
,
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therfore
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therefore
, their genes, their good health, or even their placebo effect. The most reliable proof
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that
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is the covid 19 disease that just happened
for
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about 2 years ago. In the period the disease was
speading
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spreading
speeding
speaking
, the number of
people
 who had
this
were
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 constantly
increading
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increasing
 each day.
While
 somebody could return to their normal life much earlier, many
people
 could be
healled
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healed
 with an incredible speed just by eating and
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 a rest. It simply
prove
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 that
human’s
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 genes and other body functions can help an individual heal fastly with undoubted effects. In conclusion, the argument between two different types of
medicine
 is really frightening. It
easily
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 believed
on
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 the methods that you fully investigate and understand,
however
, we need to have
the
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trust
on
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the
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modern treatment because
it’ve
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I’ve
 saved plentiful
lifes
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lives
.
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