Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at universities in many countries. Why is this? What effect does this have on society?

Universities around the world are facing an issue that they are having scientific subjects
less
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selected.
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my own perspective, I would express that
this
is developing negative consequences for society. In my first
view point
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, why are there so many people quitting science-related careers? Undoubtedly, the science curriculum is hard, not only does it require the learner to have an excellent way of thinking but
also
a good and well-developed memory. As working in investigating, technological fields, etc. Students need to work with numbers and have to do experiments and log in
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lab for hours. Which involves great passion.
Furthermore
, the graduates might find it difficult to find a well-paid job. In order to have an experimental project approved and funded, scientists must promote to the investors its commercial
potentials
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potential
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, or be listed
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the
prioritzed
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prioritized
governmental policies so that they can receive maintenance fees from the government.
Next,
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the lack of human resources in scientific areas leads to inconsistent growth of
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the social
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community. Definitely, if
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people chose science subjects in university, worker shortages would occur. There will be no scientists who work on technologies and inventions. Without those
science
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researches
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, it probably leads to
economic
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the economic
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downturn,
for instance
:
lack
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a lack
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of proper manufacturing machines reduces industrial productivity.
On the other hand
, society might encounter bad health care. As no one would do research and find
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a cure
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cure
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cures
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for diseases, create vaccines. Eventually, People can not access
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good health services and exact
diagnosis
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diagnoses
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.
To sum up
, the state of
less student
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fewer students
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choose
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to learn
scientific
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the scientific
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curriculum in many countries will
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a global issue in many
aspecs
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areas
of life.
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