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TYPICAL DAILY DEMAND FOR ELECTRICITY AND WHAT THE ELECTRICITY IS USED FOR IN WINTER

#demand #electricity #winter
The given line graph and pie chart offer the consumption of
electricity
 in the hot and cold seasons
,
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 and its insights into the percentage of
this
 energy used by household appliances in the winter. From an
overall
 perspective, the most impressive feature is that there were disparities in the demand for
electricity
 in the dry and wet weather. Particularly, the latter doubly surpassed the former. Regarding information pertaining to the first diagram, there were fluctuations in the daily uses of electric
power
 in the winter and summer. Interestingly, a lion’s share of
power
 utilization was seen throughout the midnight
of
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day
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 in the winter (nearly 50000). The
time
 6-9 o’clock underwent the smallest amount of consumption because
this
 is the
time
 people go to work and school (just a shy of 30000). The differences
of
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electricity
using
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 between day and night
is
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 insignificant in the summer. People used approximately 15000-17000 units of
power
 during
the
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sleep
time
 and when they prepare to work (0. am - 9. am).
This
 figure swelled slightly when it came to the rest
time
 of the day and reached a peak at 20000 at 13. pm. As far as the pie chart is concerned, the portion of
electricity
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 used for heating occupied the most predominant position, with 52.5%, followed by that
of
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ovens, kettles,
washing
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and washing
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 machines (17.5%). The percentage of
power
 operating lighting, TV,
radio
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 and
that
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 figure for vacuum cleaners, food mixers,
electric
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 tools mirrored each other at 15.0%
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