You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take

#neighbour #•describe #action

Dear Susan, I hope you are having a good day. I am a resident living

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unit 1000. Welcome to move to our building and enjoy a nice

neighborhood

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. I found an issue that our

fire

exit is occupied by your

two

bikes

when you moved to our building

last

week. It caused

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inconvenience to go out through

fire

exits, especially

our

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since our

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elevators are fully used.

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, I found it is a safety issue in case

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occurrences

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in our building. I kindly request you

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move your

two

bikes

out of the

fire

exit.

Due to

two

bikes

occupied

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the space,

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impacts the flexibility of opening the

fire

door. It can cause hazards if there is a

fire

event occurring in our building. You can place your

two

bikes

in the parking lot, which is free, or you can place them in your unit if you are afraid of

bikes

stolen

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. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me, or the management office. The management staff will give you good suggestions for

bikes

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storage. Best regards, Kathy

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

184 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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