You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Dear Susan, I hope you are having a good day. I am a resident living

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unit 1000. Welcome to move to our building and enjoy a nice

neighborhood

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. I found an issue that our

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exit is occupied by your

two

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bikes

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when you moved to our building

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week. It caused

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inconvenience to go out through

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exits, especially

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elevators are fully used.

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, I found it is a safety issue in case

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fire

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occurrences

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in our building. I kindly request you

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move your

two

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bikes

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out of the

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exit.

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two

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occupied

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the space,

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impacts the flexibility of opening the

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door. It can cause hazards if there is a

fire

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event occurring in our building. You can place your

two

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bikes

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in the parking lot, which is free, or you can place them in your unit if you are afraid of

bikes

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stolen

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. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me, or the management office. The management staff will give you good suggestions for

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bikes

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storage. Best regards, Kathy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Modern technology is used in many workplaces today. How do you think technology changed the ways people work? Do you think there are any disadvantages of relying on technology at work?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?