Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals think that voluntary social programs
such
as charity affairs
, developing neighbourhood or work
at the gym should be mandatory in high schools for youngsters. I personally agree with the given statements on the basis of learning, social behaviour and encounter with hard situations.
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working
To begin
with, the main reason is that social behaviour is a determining factor when young people
want to get a job. Community affairs
lead students
deal
with Add the particle
to deal
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
that not only working
without getting a salary Wrong verb form
work
to
their job, but some of them spent money from their Change preposition
for
pocket
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pockets
for
charity Change preposition
on
affairs
. The more participate
in community Replace the word
participation
affairs
by youngsters, the better improve their social manners. For example
, feeding of
poor Change preposition
apply
people
at church can enhance sympathy
of Correct article usage
the sympathy
students
with individuals who have
not sufficient money to prepare daily food. Add a missing verb
do have
Hence
, free public jobs can increase the responsibility of young students
to society.
Having said that, however
, development
of social behaviour Correct article usage
the development
are
not the only factor in Change the verb form
is
this
respect, other arguments is that children will be encountered with
Change preposition
apply
the
hard situations that they have not experienced yet. Correct article usage
apply
That is
to say, this
unpaid social jobs Correct determiner usage
these
is
almost the types of occupation which most Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
students
didn't know about them and they may face them in the future. Therefore
, Students
are more likely to learn how to solve the unpredictable problems that they
may exist Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
the hard condition. Change preposition
in
For instance
, teaching English to foreign students
is a good experience for students
, to know more about the culture of other countries. Thus
, they would know how to manage the
problems and deal with them.
Correct article usage
apply
To conclude
, I personally agree that the view that it is acceptable to put students
on free public services. This
is mainly because young people
need to know how to behave in society and how to deal with problems in their real life.Submitted by Allazhar on
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