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More and more people don’t feel safe when they leave home. Why is this? What could be done to address this issue?

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Nowadays, the share of inhabitants who feel
themselves
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unsafe about going out shows
significantly
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 growth. The aim of
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 is to investigate the
probably
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 causes
such
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the gradually
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gradually
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 rise of crime and worrying about
health
 issues, which might be prevented by strengthening punishment,
beside
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along with
 self-protection. To commence with, in
contemporary
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 world economic conditions which are getting worth because of
pandemic
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 situation put pressure both on
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the employer
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employer
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employers
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 and
on
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employees.
Therefore
, several types of survival and human being circumstances give
result
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the result
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of
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a sharply
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sharply
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of
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police
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 unprecedented offence reports which include committing of robbery, scams and even kidnappings, with rising anxiety of humanity to go outside, respectively. Despite
of
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time and
week
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days
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 these occasions do not dwell. In my point of view, if
government
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 toughening penalties for atrocity, the range of offenders and thieves will visibly reduce. To illustrate
further
,
variety
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 of scenarios of consequences will bother humans before crossing the wrong path, which will lead to secure walking out of the house.
Secondly
, people worry about going out because of
health
 problems. It is believed, that after
situation
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 with
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the coronavirus
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coronavirus
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,coronavirus
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 society
feel
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caution
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 about their
health
, and
prefer
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 to stay
at
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 their residential zone to avoid any plagues.
For instance
, by
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of
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Health
 and Care magazine, about three fifth of Earth occupants, still are wearing a mask and
taking
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 medicine to avoid sicknesses. I believe it is better, to walk
outdoor
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 especially
engage
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 in
sport
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 exercises to strengthen wellness.
In contrast
, to protect ourselves and to go outside without any fear, we can wear specific protections
as
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 a mask, and not enter any facilities, which are predicted to be crowded.
To sum up
, in the
21st century
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 anxiety about going outside is felt by citizens, which can be explained by and it can be
cause
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the cause
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 of the rise of crime all over the world and
the
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health
 concerns.
Although
 it can be prevented by
streghinng
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stretching
of punishment for crime and protecting yourself from
virus
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viruses
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 with various
equipments
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equipment
.
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