The table and chart below give information and place budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.

The table and chart below give information and place budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and chart show how it was distributed.
One table and two pie charts compare the details of the police budget in a specific place located in England for the years 2017 and 2018, which contain the basic information about its financial resources and the way it was allocated. Obviously, the total fund saw an increase from 2017 to 2018, with a slight rise in each part of it. As for how the fund was distributed, the majority was paid to the police and other fellows as their wages and the rest of it was spent on technology, construction and transportation. The amount of police budget increased from 304.7
million
to 318.6
million
, and the main body of it came from the national government (175.5
million
in 2017 and 177.8
million
in 2018). The local taxes ranked No.2 in the source list and the other sources like grants were not singly calculated
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but added up together. The proportion of the fund allocated to the local officers and staff decreased by 6 percentage points, falling from 75% to 69%.
On the contrary
, the money used for the development of technology saw an apparent rise (from 8% to 14%),
while
the percentage of the money spent on buildings and transport kept stable.
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