The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
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The given line chart illustrates the percentage of paper and cardboard, glass containers,
aluminum
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aluminium
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cans and plastics that were recycled between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
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, we can see that paper and cardboard were the most recycled materials,
however
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, after 1994
it
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they
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experienced a decline
while
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the other three categories increased over the period. In 1982, about 65% of paper and cardboard
was
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were
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recycled.
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figure fluctuated before rising steeply to reach a peak of 80% in 1994. From
then
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on, it decreased steadily to a level of 70% in 2010.
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, half of the glass containers were recycled in 1982; after
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down
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to 40% in 1990,
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figure gradually rose to 60% by 2010. As for
aluminum
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aluminium
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, it only started to be recycled
from
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in
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1986, starting at just 5%, but
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it climbed rapidly over the next 25 years and by 2010 it had reached 45%. The recycling of plastics,
instead
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, was not introduced until 1990, and,
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its growth was constant over the years, it was very slow, rising from about 2% to around 8%.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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