in many countries men and women are working full time it is therefore logical for both men and women to share their house hold tasks. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

I would like to take
this
opportunity to provide
this
recommendation letter in support of Mengyu Yao’s application to your prestigious university. I am currently serving as an associate professor at the Shanghai University of International Business and Economics, having completed my postdoctoral studies in 2012. As a former professor of Financial Management, a course in which
XXX
excelled during her undergraduate studies,
as well as
her thesis advisor, I am pleased to provide an objective and comprehensive evaluation of her academic abilities.
XXX
impressed me with her active thinking, enthusiasm for learning, and insightfulness. As one of the most engaged students in class, she regularly connected theoretical knowledge with current economic issues.
For example
, she analyzed the cost control or financing plan of a large high-tech company in the market from a financial management perspective, like supply chain financing through controlling the accounts receivable or payable cycle. She never missed a class or handed in assignments late, and her final exam score was higher than 90% of her peers,
as a result
, I gave her an A for her
overall
performance
.
Moreover
, when reviewing her thesis, I found that
XXX
possessed strong data collection and analysis skills,
as well as
proficient writing ability. Her research aimed to investigate the relationship between diversified operations and corporate
performance
in Chinese listed companies. She independently collected financial data from nearly 150 listed companies for three consecutive years, and not only analyzed their financial
performance
from a conventional perspective using financial ratios, but
also
demonstrated the correlation between diversified business operations and
overall
market
performance
.
Furthermore
, unlike other long-winded papers, she incorporated visual aids
such
as graphs to demonstrate changes in trends and differences in comparisons, accentuating the focal points of her analysis and making the content accessible and digestible. I believe graduate studies will deepen
XXX
’s knowledge basis and cultivate a multicultural view for her future career.
Hence
, I strongly recommend
XXX
for the Economics Master's program at the University of Hong Kong based on her
performance
and abilities. Should you have any inquiries regarding
this
candidate, please feel free to contact me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • - Household tasks
  • - Full-time work
  • - Logical
  • - Share
  • - Men and women
  • - Equality
  • - Gender roles
  • - Burden
  • - Teamwork
  • - Cooperation
  • - Counterargument
  • - Refutation
  • - Cultural expectations
  • - Time constraints
  • - Work-life balance
  • - Personal preferences
  • - Abilities
  • - Importance
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