You went to your friend house and had meal. Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal. 1) Tell what you enjoyed about the meal. 2) Thanks to his parents and what you think about them 3) suggest arrangements for his invite at your place.

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Dear Rahim, Thank you for having me at your place for the karaoke party, I thoroughly enjoyed my time over. The food your mom cooked was simply amazing, I cannot get over the Chicken Tikka she cooked. It was tender and full of spices; I have never had a Tikka that delicious ever! I am thankful to your parents for hosting me so well, they are the most chill parents I have ever come across. That reminds me of the song your dad dedicated to your mom that was so cute of him to sing a song from the archives of Bollywood it was hilarious! the time just flew by with them, I have never felt more positive in a

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Saturday? Let's have a Bar B Que party! I will take care of the arrangements, you can take care of the drinks; you have the best taste in them haha! I cannot wait to hear back, waiting for you to come over. Best Regards, Karim

Submitted by jiwani.s.karim on Thu Mar 02 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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You went to your friend house and had meal. Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal. 1) Tell what you enjoyed about the meal. 2) Thanks to his parents and what you think about them 3) suggest arrangements for his invite at your place.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • What have you learned while working for the company • Did you enjoyed working there • What are your reasons for leaving the job