Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your own opinion

A group of individuals believe that without an undergraduate ,

degree

no

one

can't acquire success in the journey of

life

,meanwhile

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others think that the first statement is not acceptable at

this

moment.In my opinion, a graduate

person

can lead a happy

life

than none graduate

person

.I will discuss both these views and give a logical conclusion. On the

one

hand ,when a

person

has a

degree

, it will assist him or her to get a well-paid

job

.

In other words

,management always looks for an educated

person

,

where

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an undergraduate

degree

must need.If he or she gets a good

job

it will help them to lead an astounding

life

.

For example

, after finishing engineering people join an IT company which gives them a lot of money.

Apart from

this

,many students are hired by

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prominent companies like NASA ,SPACE X and so on.

On the other hand

, a successful

job

or

degree

is not always enough to lead a happy

life

.Because plenty of individuals working in a company with high salary but they are not happy.Most of the time they are not satisfied with their

job

.

However

,a none educated

person

miserable

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in

life

because without a

degree

no

one

gives them a good

job

,though the

person

has a huge amount of experience in that work.

For instance

, people who know about mechanical engineering but don't have a

degree

in administration never count as

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professional

worker

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.

That is

why they are not paid well for their work. In conclusion, a university

degree

put a

person

one

step

further

than those who

has

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not.They can easily get a

job

and gradually increase their lifetime value ,

whereas

people without a

degree

find difficulty in terms of jobs

as well as

respect in society.