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Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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A group of individuals believe that without an undergraduate ,
degree
 no
one
 can't acquire success in the journey of
life
,meanwhile
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others think that the first statement is not acceptable at
this
 moment.In my opinion, a graduate
person
 can lead a happy
life
 than none graduate
person
.I will discuss both these views and give a logical conclusion. On the
one
 hand ,when a
person
 has a
degree
, it will assist him or her to get a well-paid
job
.
In other words
,management always looks for an educated
person
,
where
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 an undergraduate
degree
 must need.If he or she gets a good
job
 it will help them to lead an astounding
life
.
For example
, after finishing engineering people join an IT company which gives them a lot of money.
Apart from
this
,many students are hired by
a
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prominent companies like NASA ,SPACE X and so on.
On the other hand
, a successful
job
 or
degree
 is not always enough to lead a happy
life
.Because plenty of individuals working in a company with high salary but they are not happy.Most of the time they are not satisfied with their
job
.
However
,a none educated
person
miserable
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 in
life
 because without a
degree
 no
one
 gives them a good
job
,though the
person
 has a huge amount of experience in that work.
For instance
, people who know about mechanical engineering but don't have a
degree
 in administration never count as
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professional
worker
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.
That is
 why they are not paid well for their work. In conclusion, a university
degree
 put a
person
one
 step
further
 than those who
has
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 not.They can easily get a
job
 and gradually increase their lifetime value ,
whereas
 people without a
degree
 find difficulty in terms of jobs
as well as
 respect in society.
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