The grapg below shows the number od tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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Caribbean

island

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-visiting

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that stayed on cruises and stayed on islands from 2010 to 2017. The unit is measured in millions of

visitors

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.

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, the

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of

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who were staying on the

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fluctuated meanwhile

people

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who were staying on cruise

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rose with some fluctuations.

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, the total

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of

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experienced a

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increase over the period of time. In 2010, the

overall

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of

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1

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gradually jumped to 1.5

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in 2012.

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, the total

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of travellers continue

increased

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to 2.5

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and approximately grew to 0.25

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in 2015.

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,

at the end

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of the time, the

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of all

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hit a ceiling of 3.5

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. The

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of

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living on the

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was roughly 0.75

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and higher than

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living on

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about 0.5

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at the beginning of the time. After that, two years ago, the volume of

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staying on the

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slightly grew by about 1.25

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whereas

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the

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of

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staying on

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reached the bottom at around 0.25

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. In 2015, the

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of

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who remained on the

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sharply went up to 1.5

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while

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the

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of

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who remained on cruise

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significantly climbed to around 1.25

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but the

visitors

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remaining on the

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declined approximately to 1.2

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consequently

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,

visitors

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remaining in

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greater than the

people

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who remain on the

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around 0.25

million

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in 2016.