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The grapg below shows the number od tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

#grapg #od #tourists #caribbean #island
The graph illustrates the volume of
the
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Caribbean
island
-visiting
tourists
 that stayed on cruises and stayed on islands from 2010 to 2017. The unit is measured in millions of
visitors
.
Overall
, the
number
 of
visitors
 who were staying on the
island
 fluctuated meanwhile
people
 who were staying on cruise
ships
 rose with some fluctuations.
However
, the total
number
 of
tourists
 experienced a
remarkably
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 increase over the period of time. In 2010, the
overall
number
 of
tourists
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were
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 1
million
then
 gradually jumped to 1.5
million
 in 2012.
Moreover
, the total
number
 of travellers continue
increased
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 to 2.5
million
 and approximately grew to 0.25
million
 in 2015.
Lastly
,
at the end
 of the time, the
number
 of all
visitors
 hit a ceiling of 3.5
million
. The
number
 of
people
 living on the
island
 was roughly 0.75
million
 and higher than
people
 living on
ships
 about 0.5
million
 at the beginning of the time. After that, two years ago, the volume of
tourists
 staying on the
island
 slightly grew by about 1.25
million
whereas
 the
number
 of
tourists
 staying on
ships
 reached the bottom at around 0.25
million
. In 2015, the
number
 of
people
 who remained on the
island
 sharply went up to 1.5
million
while
 the
number
 of
people
 who remained on cruise
ships
 significantly climbed to around 1.25
million
 but the
visitors
 remaining on the
island
 declined approximately to 1.2
million
consequently
,
visitors
 remaining in
ships
 greater than the
people
 who remain on the
island
 around 0.25
million
 in 2016.
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