Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

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Dear Riddhi, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am very happy to know that you moved to your new house in New York. On

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very special ,occasion I am sending you one small gift as a good luck gesture. I have sent an ergonomic armchair to make your meetings comfortable. It's a wooden chair with a cushion on it. I just sent it to your new address via blue dart courier service with booking number 1234. It may take up to 14 working days to reach you.

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, If there is any delay

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unforeseen circumstances

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the courier service will let you know. They will contact you on the day of delivery to ensure your availability so please let them know your convenient time. I chose to gift you a bench as I know you are a software engineer and work for hours seating on a chair and it must be terrible with a normal recliner. So I designed an ergonomic chair for you which will help you to seat for long hours without any back pain. Let me know how is it. With love, Kishan

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

191 words

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