Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

#friend #house #gift #-describe #-tell #-explain

Dear Riddhi, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am very happy to know that you moved to your new house in New York. On

this

very special ,occasion I am sending you one small gift as a good luck gesture. I have sent an ergonomic armchair to make your meetings comfortable. It's a wooden chair with a cushion on it. I just sent it to your new address via blue dart courier service with booking number 1234. It may take up to 14 working days to reach you.

However

, If there is any delay

due to

unforeseen circumstances

then

the courier service will let you know. They will contact you on the day of delivery to ensure your availability so please let them know your convenient time. I chose to gift you a bench as I know you are a software engineer and work for hours seating on a chair and it must be terrible with a normal recliner. So I designed an ergonomic chair for you which will help you to seat for long hours without any back pain. Let me know how is it. With love, Kishan

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

191 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

The Closing

Due to traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages businesses to move to the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or this agree with this statement?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Many people say that university education should only be offered to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people with varying marks and all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.