The graph illustrates the number of birth which happens from 1920 till 2020 in China and in the USA
This
line chart depicts the figure of born from 1920 till 2020 in different countries which are China and USA
. It is clear from the graph that, both of the nations fluctuated, in the beginning, starting from approximately the same number.
Correct article usage
the USA
According to
what is shown firstly
, China showed some fluctuation from 1920 to 1940 and then
remained for a year. Furthermore
the number of birth increased until it reached the highest level at 20 per cent which was the highest rate in both countries and Add a comma
,Furthermore
following
this
it hit the less point at just under 5%.
Secondly
, USA
the beginning was the same as in China Correct article usage
the USA
however
, it decreased in addition
to hitting a low of around 5 per cent moreover
increased by 10 per cent and then
slightly dropped to just over 6%.
In conclusion
we can say that the birth rates were rising starting from 1920 to 1950 except in 1945 and Add a comma
,conclusion
then
declined after that.Submitted by smmoe289 on
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