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Some people think any form of experimentation on animals for any reason is wrong. They believe all such experiments should be banned. Others think the benefits research offer us in terms of medical advances make experiments on animals worthwhile. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Nowadays, medical science is improving day by day. A number of
people
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 believe that the
usage
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 of
animals
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 for medical
experiments
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 is inhumane.
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, a small number of
people
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 think that for the improvement of science
experiments
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 should be done on
animals
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.
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, I personally believe that
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experiments
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 should not be done on
animals
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 because they
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 have
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 to live and enjoy their life with family, and doing
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 may cost the
animals
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 their
lives
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.
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 with, numerous
people
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 are against doing
trials
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 on
animals
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 as they consider
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 very unkind.
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, there are chances of mishaps in
experiments
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 where
animals
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 might lose their
lives
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, or they might become handicapped,
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. Decrement in the population of
animals
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 can affect our
ecosystem
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 biodiversity.
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, it is almost impossible to survive for incapable
animals
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 in the wild which leads to unnecessary loss of animal
lives
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.
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, new hair styling products are first tested on
animals
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’ eyes which leaves some of them blind.
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 blind
animals
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 cannot survive in their natural habitats, and they are left to die.
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 behaviour is inhuman in nature.
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, a number of
people
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 believe that doing
trials
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 on
animals
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 is necessary for the growth of science. At
first,
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it is considered that human
lives
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 are much more precious than animal
lives
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.
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, human beings should not be used for
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experiments
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 because of human rights laws.
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,
animals
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 are used in
experiments
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 for developing medicines.
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, at the time of the development of the Covid-19 vaccine, the
trials
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 were done on
animals
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.
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 of successful
trials
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, vaccines got approval for humans.
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, humans should not be used for
experiments
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 so,
animals
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 are used for
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trials
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.
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, they
also
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 have
right
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 to live and enjoy their life with their families.
Hence
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, I believe that
such
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experiments
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 must be avoided as far as possible.

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