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Some people think any form of experimentation on animals for any reason is wrong. They believe all such experiments should be banned. Others think the benefits research offer us in terms of medical advances make experiments on animals worthwhile. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Nowadays, medical science is improving day by day. A number of
people
 believe that the
usage
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 of
animals
 for medical
experiments
 is inhumane.
On the other hand
, a small number of
people
 think that for the improvement of science
experiments
 should be done on
animals
.
However
, I personally believe that
such
experiments
 should not be done on
animals
 because they
also
 have
right
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 to live and enjoy their life with family, and doing
this
 may cost the
animals
 their
lives
.
To begin
 with, numerous
people
 are against doing
trials
 on
animals
 as they consider
this
 very unkind.
Firstly
, there are chances of mishaps in
experiments
 where
animals
 might lose their
lives
, or they might become handicapped,
as a result
. Decrement in the population of
animals
 can affect our
ecosystem
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 biodiversity.
Additionally
, it is almost impossible to survive for incapable
animals
 in the wild which leads to unnecessary loss of animal
lives
.
For example
, new hair styling products are first tested on
animals
’ eyes which leaves some of them blind.
Such
 blind
animals
 cannot survive in their natural habitats, and they are left to die.
This
 behaviour is inhuman in nature.
On the other hand
, a number of
people
 believe that doing
trials
 on
animals
 is necessary for the growth of science. At
first,
it is considered that human
lives
 are much more precious than animal
lives
.
In addition
, human beings should not be used for
such
experiments
 because of human rights laws.
Therefore
,
animals
 are used in
experiments
 for developing medicines.
For instance
, at the time of the development of the Covid-19 vaccine, the
trials
 were done on
animals
.
As a result
 of successful
trials
, vaccines got approval for humans.
To conclude
, humans should not be used for
experiments
 so,
animals
 are used for
such
trials
.
However
, they
also
 have
right
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the right
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 to live and enjoy their life with their families.
Hence
, I believe that
such
experiments
 must be avoided as far as possible.
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