the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The provided maps illustrate the current situation of an industrial region in Norbiton and
planned
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change of
this
site in the future.
Overall
, there will be a big development from converting
factory
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factories
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to residential
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and supporting facilities of modern life. Moving to the details, the factories situated in Norbiton will be changed into housings for citizens where the arrangement of
this
building circle a roundabout will be moved to along new streets added to the west and north of
this
circular place.
In addition
, there will be the introduction of shops and
medical
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centre
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located on the western and eastern
part
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of
this
roundabout.
Following
this
,
playground
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and school will be erected
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the right of a big-circular area where the latter will be
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the end of the road,
while
the former will be between housings alongside
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. Another striking development is farmland previously
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top
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and middle of the map will be moved to the right side because the building of new
street
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streets
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and
bridge
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bridges
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as well as
houses will be introduced in
this
place.
Subsequently
, a new circular area will be built in the south part of a previous roundabout.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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