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Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?

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Some perspectives highly value the contribution derived from art,
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 others consider it a waste of money. I personally agree with the former since it is a good way to express the culture and tradition of a region to others, on top of that, it could be a resemble of a nation which attracts many oversea tourists to enhance local economics.  First of all, most well-known statues or buildings with unique design are seen as iconic landscapes which represents the core meaning of a region. Take Merlion in Singapore as an example, Merlion with a special appearance is
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 the
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 of Singapore, its special look provokes
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intriguing
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tourists to take a look in person, which allows more people to get familiar with their culture.
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, the increase
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 visitors could enhance the revenue of local businesses and boost
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local economies. The art itself may not have practical usage,
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, it could contribute to society in the other way by increasing the income of tourism industries, and creating more job opportunities.
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 as Elfe Towar, which was strongly opposed in the beginning by many celebrities and politicians,
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, it is considered
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an iconic landscape in France
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nowadays. It attracts thousands of millions of tourists around the world, which
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 in a tidy sum for local government. 
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, despite that art pieces could cost a great amount of money and barely has practical usage, it is a good way to introduce their culture and tradition to the world, on top of that, it could attract more visitors and derive a positive trend of local economic.
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, in my perspective, arts are essential in societies in many aspects.
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