Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Live performances at the
theater
or stadium usually cost more than shows of the same content broadcast live on television. Change the spelling
theatre
However
, I believe the high prices Linking Words
people
pay to see Use synonyms
such
shows in person do not always guarantee better quality and that televised Linking Words
events
are actually more worth watching than we give them credit for.
In many ways, Use synonyms
people
who sit at Use synonyms
home
and watch Use synonyms
TV
generally have a more enjoyable Use synonyms
overall
experience. Since it is their own Linking Words
home
, they can stretch their legs or even lie down to watch the Use synonyms
show
or the game being broadcast, unlike those witnessing the same event in crowded Use synonyms
theaters
or at rowdy stadiums who are frequently disturbed by strangers around them. Programs that are shown on Change the spelling
theatres
TV
are Use synonyms
also
well edited as the Linking Words
events
Use synonyms
go
on, and only the best Change the form of the verb
going
footages
will make it to the screen, so Fix the agreement mistake
footage
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TV
Correct article usage
the TV
audience
can benefit from the high visual and auditory quality Fix the agreement mistake
audiences
watching
from Change preposition
of watching
home
. Use synonyms
Besides
, if Linking Words
people
no longer find a program interesting, they can easily switch to another channel or simply turn off the Use synonyms
TV
and go do something else, rather than having to wait until the end of it to leave the venue Use synonyms
due to
concerns of bothering fellow viewers or wasting some expensive Linking Words
hard- earned
tickets.
Some Add a hyphen
hard-earned
people
may say that being physically present at the place where a Use synonyms
show
occurs brings a more joyous feeling for sporting and cultural Use synonyms
events
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such
as a football game or a music concert Linking Words
are
exhilarating group activities that are best shared among many Change the verb form
is
people
; Use synonyms
however
, I highly doubt that it is how I would feel if I ever get the chance to set foot in Linking Words
such
places. First of all, not everyone can afford or are early enough to buy VIP seats that give them a good view of what is going to happen on the stage or in the field. Linking Words
Secondly
, even if the joint bustling group reaction to a Linking Words
show
or game can somehow add to each individual's experience, it simultaneously takes away the focus of those who are trying to understand what is going on, and Use synonyms
this
is especially true for sports matches where watching them live at the arena means no expert commentary will be provided to help spectators follow.
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To conclude
, I believe those who choose to attend live Linking Words
events
can have a good time in some way, but if Use synonyms
people
truly want to make the most out of their experience with a music Use synonyms
show
, a sporting match or a drama production, it is recommended that they watch them through the screen of the television in the comfort of their own Use synonyms
home
where they have the absolute freedom in enjoying the Use synonyms
show
the way they please, without having to spend a single penny.Use synonyms
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Word Count
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