The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st Century.

The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st Century.
The maps give information about how the town of Lakeside changed between 2000 and 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that the town was transformed and there were many buildings for leisure facilities and educational centres. On the left side of the maps we can see the residential area which stayed in the same place in 2009, but near
this
place refurbished a lot
such
as a new reconstructed car park, offices, schools, multi-screen cinema and shopping centre which used to be Derelict warehouses, old town building, only one school, arts centre and residential area that located on the south-west of the river.
At the end
of the period was opened a modern university which was placed
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north of the school. There was a large location where was a Woodland and lake in 2000,
although
the placement was reduced in size and the lake was replaced with a pond so that the majority of trees were chopped down after 9 years. A residential area had been demolished and an industrial complex become larger than it was at the beginning of the period.
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