The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.

The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
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The given diagram illustrates the process of trapping greenhouse
gases
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from the Sun.
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, it can be seen that there are 5 possible ways of realising Sun energy which is heat from the Earth's surface that may radiate back to space or be trapped by greenhouse
gases
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,
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polluting
gases
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from burning fossil fuels add extra carbon dioxide. The shortest way is when energy reflects off the atmosphere.
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, we can see that the Sun heat the surface of the Earth but
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power does not stay on the ground, so some amount of energy leaves it and can radiate back into space, meanwhile, the second event is that heat can be trapped by greenhouse
gases
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inside the atmosphere.
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, we should not forget about car and manufacturing activity that
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participates in the gas cycle. Their contribution consists of burning vast amounts of fossil fuels that add extra carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words gases with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural process
  • greenhouse effect
  • Earth's surface
  • sun's energy
  • atmosphere
  • reflected
  • absorbed
  • re-radiated
  • greenhouse gases
  • carbon dioxide
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • water vapour
  • ultraviolet radiation
  • infrared radiation
  • fossil fuel burning
  • deforestation
  • concentration
  • global warming
  • melting ice caps
  • glaciers
  • rising sea levels
  • extreme weather patterns
  • mitigating
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