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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, with the development of
information
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 technology, when users use some applications or social networking sites,
the
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 personal
information
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 of them is held by many internet companies or organizations. One of the controversial questions is whether the advantages of
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 issue outweigh the disadvantages or not. In my viewpoint, there are more disadvantages than
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advantages that
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 problem can bring.
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 drawbacks to support my opinion. No one can deny the fact that taking access to
information
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 technology is for granted.
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 advanced society, the number of individuals using the internet is increasing.
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, the
loss
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 of private
information
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 is an inevitable aspect and
people
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 have to accept it.
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, the fact that companies and organizations have
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information
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 helps them to provide better services
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faster
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 speed. Take Grab as an example,
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 to
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, many
people
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 think that
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a disadvantage for individuals. Many barriers to wider IT access
such
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 as the
loss
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 of privacy. Because the wide use of
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 about one’s habits, interests, location, name,
phone
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and phone
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 number, to name a few will make
people
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 worry and they will not feel comfortable when using any services including providing personal
information
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.
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, nowadays, many companies use
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 private data for the wrong purpose because they want to make a profit from it.
As a consequence
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, many
people
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, especially the elderly lost their property and are disturbed because of the
loss
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 of their
information
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. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that the
loss
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 of personal
information
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 brings more drawbacks than its advantages. It is a significant problem that society
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 to tackle
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