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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, with the development of
information
 technology, when users use some applications or social networking sites,
the
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 personal
information
 of them is held by many internet companies or organizations. One of the controversial questions is whether the advantages of
this
 issue outweigh the disadvantages or not. In my viewpoint, there are more disadvantages than
the
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advantages that
this
 problem can bring.
This
 essay is to give some benefits
as well as
 drawbacks to support my opinion. No one can deny the fact that taking access to
information
 technology is for granted.
With
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 advanced society, the number of individuals using the internet is increasing.
As a result
, the
loss
 of private
information
 is an inevitable aspect and
people
 have to accept it.
Besides
, the fact that companies and organizations have
user’s
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users’
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information
 helps them to provide better services
with
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at
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faster
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 speed. Take Grab as an example,
In addition
 to
this
, many
people
 think that
this
 problem is
at
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a disadvantage for individuals. Many barriers to wider IT access
such
 as the
loss
 of privacy. Because the wide use of
information
 about one’s habits, interests, location, name,
phone
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and phone
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 number, to name a few will make
people
 worry and they will not feel comfortable when using any services including providing personal
information
.
Moreover
, nowadays, many companies use
user’s
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users’
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 private data for the wrong purpose because they want to make a profit from it.
As a consequence
, many
people
, especially the elderly lost their property and are disturbed because of the
loss
 of their
information
. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that the
loss
 of personal
information
 brings more drawbacks than its advantages. It is a significant problem that society
need
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needs
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 to tackle
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