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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawabacks?

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The phenomenon of
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 number of
students
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 to study in other
countries
 has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as
people
's views on
this
 issue in question may be, I personally believe that more
people
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 to study
aborad
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abroad
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 more advantages will
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 to them and
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their countries
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 and the disadvantages will be outweighed. Regarding the disadvantages of many
students
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 to learn at
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foreign schools, probably the most serious drawback is that
people
 will stay and
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 their
career
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 in
the
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foregin
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foreign
countries
 after graduating from school.
For example
, some
people
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by
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the
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foreign culture. So, some of them may
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consider
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immigration, which in turn
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 the labour and talent of
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 home
countries
. Despite the aforementioned disadvantages, I still believe that there are more
beneftis
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benefits
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 exceed the drawbacks. Of all the advantages of
this
 phenomenon, probably the most significant benefit is that
people
 can bring
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new technologies back to their home
countries
 after they
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 their education.
For example
,
students
 will see many new things during
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 time
of
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living in foreign
countries
 and become to their own experience which combines with their personal philosophy.
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, they share their experience with their
countries
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 the path of their career.
Therefore
,
people
 and
countries
 both receive
benefiits
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benefits
 from
this
 situation. Under
this
 line of thinking, it seems to me that number of
students
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 to stay in other
countries
 may be a
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of
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 the
countries
,
however
, the new information and technologies they bring back would help their
countries
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 continuously and maintain their value in the jobs market.
Hence
, I believe that the benefits would outweigh the drawbacks.
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