the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The provided pie charts elucidate the usage of
energy
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in Australian households and the emissions of
greenhouse
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gases
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from them. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the highest
amount
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of
energy
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is consumed for heating purposes,
however
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, emissions of
greenhouse
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gases
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are done in substantial amounts by water heating. Cooling consumes the lowest
energy
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and emits the least
amount
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of
greenhouse
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gases
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. The proportion of
energy
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consumed for heating purposes is 42%. It is followed closely by water heating at 30%, half of
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amount
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is consumed by other appliances. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling consume significantly less
amount
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of
energy
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which is 7%, 4% and 2% respectively. Analysing the chart of
greenhouse
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gas emissions, water heating and other appliances release exactly 50% of
greenhouse
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gases
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which are found to be the most harmful to the environment. Heating releases 15% of
greenhouse
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gases
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into the atmosphere. Refrigeration releases 14% of
greenhouse
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gases
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which is double the number of
energy
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consumed by it. Lighting and cooling are both below 10% in the emission of environmentally harmful
gases
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gases, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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