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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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Items from
plastic
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 have a negative effect on the
environment
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. Many
people
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 throw
plastic
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for
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floor
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due to
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 these actions that suffer from nature and the
environment
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,
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however
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people
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 can help nature and show positive sides . Preventing
such
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 things can help improve the situation. In
this
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 essay, solutions to the problem will be found and logical solutions will be provided. One of the serious
issue
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 is that
plastics
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 have
a
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various
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of
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harms
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ground,
plastics
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 are not eco-friendly, and have negative effects
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 wild animals. All of these problems are
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plastics
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People
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 can help their
environment
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 and nature,
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firstly
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people
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 can not use
plastic
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 products
as
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 bottles of water,
plastic
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 games for our children,
disposable
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 devices, because their packaging is made from
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,if consumers use
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 devices , they must clean up after themselves and throw the
plastic
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 in the right place.
According to
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 the statistics, nowadays 32% of the
environment
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 suffers from
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 thing. All
people
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 can help
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the
environment
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 but more help from governments and individuals. Governments and individuals, since they are public figures, should arrange some events where city ​​dwellers go out and collect garbage as
plastics
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, if the government divides the area and lets the districts collect
plastic
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,
this
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 will help the
environment
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.
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imprudence
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 of
people
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 leads to the fact that it has a negative effect on the
environment
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, governments and individuals can help with
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 situation by making bans
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plastics
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.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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