Nowadays, the young are busy with various types of paid
work
.mostly masses take it as inappropriate and some opine it as a study understanding for taking responsibilities.I want to discuss both sides before giving a final conclusion.
To commence with,why do individuals observe doing paid
work
in a bad manner
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working for
money
at an early age not only distract children from their study but
also
encourage them to run for
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money
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their whole life.
for example
,it is clearly manifested in the IT sector where many young doing
work
in order to earn
money
without
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interest.
moreover
,all students do not have the same capabilities for doing
work
and studying both at the same time and if someone started doing
work
early it was very difficult for them to make a concentration on their studies.
Despite the fact,we have discussed a plethora of detrimental effects of paid internships but doing jobs
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teenagers exhibits some positive effects
also
such
as working for wealth at
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age aids to improve
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knowledge about
money
and
also
defines their value.
besides
these,a large amount of
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able to pay for their
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education and
thus
children have
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only the option as
work
to arrange
money
.
Furthermore
,giving efforts for making
money
from childhood helps to enhance
to enhance Remove the redundancy
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the skills,
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used in upcoming future to perform well in
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job.
In conclusion,
Although
unpaid has
a drastic benefitsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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but Remove the conjunction
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some
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theChange preposition
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study of children.