TASK 1 You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to
complaint
about Replace the word
complain
room
which was given to me by your hotel. I Add an article
the room
am visit
your hotel with my company called "city rent a car".
At Change the verb form
visit
first
I was Add a comma
,first
little
bit happy because your hotel looks Add an article
a little
like
modern and I thought that I will rest here without problems. But after Change preposition
apply
first
day I am faced with several problems. Add an article
the first
For instance
, fridge
is not working and Add an article
the fridge
also
there was
a few channels on your Tv.
What about if you Change the verb form
were
are
correct the problems by changing fridges and setting a lot of international channels Unnecessary verb
apply
in
your TvChange preposition
on
.
Change the punctuation
?
By
Change preposition
In
this
way
you can Add a comma
,way
satisfied
your customers Change the verb form
satisfy
however
it can be reason
for increasing your customers. I believe that you will correct the mistakes during the 2 hours and return compensation Add an article
the reason
a reason
about
15% of Change preposition
of about
payment
.
I am looking forward to your answer from my email address.
Yours faithfully,
Correct article usage
the payment
Mr.
GeorgeChange the punctuation
Mr
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