TASK 1 You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing to

complaint

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about

room

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the room

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which was given to me by your hotel. I

am visit

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visit

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your hotel with my company called "city rent a car". At

first

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,first

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I was

little

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bit happy because your hotel looks

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apply

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modern and I thought that I will rest here without problems. But after

first

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day I am faced with several problems.

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fridge

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the fridge

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is not working and

also

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there

was

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a few channels on your Tv. What about if you

are

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apply

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correct the problems by changing fridges and setting a lot of international channels

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your Tv

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this

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way

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you can

satisfied

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your customers

however

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it can be

reason

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the reason

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for increasing your customers. I believe that you will correct the mistakes during the 2 hours and return compensation

about

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15% of

payment

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. I am looking forward to your answer from my email address. Yours faithfully,

Mr.

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George

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
...which I encountered during my recent stay at...
The first issue was...
Additionally, I found that...
Moreover, the... was not up to standard.
I suggest that...
This experience has left me...
I hope you will address these concerns promptly by...
To improve your service, you could...
As a form of compensation, I would appreciate...

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TASK 1 You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints

Sources of electrocity in four countries 2003-2008

In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?